i didn't homework.

2012-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hi~!! teacher jane. how's your today?? i'm very happy. because,Today's weather is very cool and sunny. i don't like hot weather.i have fever very much in my body. anyway i'm sorry~ i didn't my homework. i can't understand the sentence. so i was stuffy. and,i'm really sorry about yesterday. i'm while on duty when i taking the phone call. so, i can't studying with you anymore. the time isn't mine in office. understand me. see you soon~ bye teacher.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]!

Thank you for your composition today! Well, it\'s a sunny day here in the Philippines today. I heard that it\'s really hot in your country these days because of the summer season. Regarding your homework, I understand that you couldn\'t do it because it was quite confusing. Don\'t worry about it, I\'m going to explain it to you during our class this afternoon. Tae care and have a nice day!

T. JanE ^^ 

Hi, teacher Jane.
>> Correct 

how\'s your today??
>> How\'s your day?

>> How are you today?

I\'m very happy.
>> Correct 

because,Today\'s weather is very cool and sunny.
>> The weather is very cool and sunny.

I don\'t like hot weather.

>> Correct 

i have fever very much in my body.
>> I sweat a lot.

Anyway, I\'m sorry~ 
>> Correct 

i didn\'t my homework.
>> I didn\'t do my homework.

I can\'t understand the sentence.
>> Correct 

so i was stuffy.
>> I was not interested.

and, I\'m really sorry about yesterday.
>> Correct 

i\'m while on duty when i taking the phone call.
>> I was on duty when I took your phone call.

so, i can\'t studying with you anymore.

>> That\'s why I couldn\'t study with you.

the time isn\'t mine in office.
>> I can\'t control my time in the office.

understand me.
>> Please understand.

see you soon~
>> Correct 

bye teacher.

>> Correct 

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