I didn't participate a party. part1

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. I left the coffee for a minute to cool because it was too hot to drink. 2. He wasn't strong enough to lift that heavy box. 3. There aren't enough policemen in our town. 4. Do you have enough information to help me with this problem? 5. It is too difficult to do for a little child. 6. I do not have too much time to prepare dinner. 7. I didn't buy the car because it was too expensive. 8. He didn't work hard enough to pass the exam. 9. My mum can't sleep because she drinks too much coffee. 10. She isn't old enough to start driving. I borrowed two books in the library. Both of are about English. one of them is about reading and the other is about writing. I borrowed it to enhance my English skills. these are basic book and I already read half of the reading book. I'm In the dormitory which is not comfortable like my room. I still In Daejun and I will stay here until next Friday. There are lots of accommodations here which seems like identical apartment. I'm at the 4th floor.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for always allotting time to do your homework.
Really? You are going to stay there until next Friday?

Oh my god! But think positive. You have a lot of time to learn many things.

I am impressed with your grammar homework these days. Keep it up!

Talk to you later.

Teacher Nina

 

1. I left the coffee for a minute to cool because it was too hot to drink.

>> Correct!
2. He wasn\'t strong enough to lift that heavy box.

>> Correct!
3. There aren\'t enough policemen in our town.

>> Correct!
4. Do you have enough information to help me with this problem?

>> Correct!
5. It is too difficult to do for a little child.

>> Correct!
6. I do not have too much time to prepare dinner.

>> I do not have enough time to prepare dinner.
7. I didn\'t buy the car because it was too expensive.

>> Correct!
8. He didn\'t work hard enough to pass the exam.

>> Correct!
9. My mum can\'t sleep because she drinks too much coffee.

>> Correct!
10. She isn\'t old enough to start driving.

>> Correct!

I borrowed two books in the library.

>> Correct!
Both of are about English.

>> Both of it are about English.

one of them is about reading and the other is about writing.

>> Correct!

I borrowed it to enhance my English skills. these are basic book and I already read half of the reading book.

>> I borrowed it to enhance my English skills. There are basic books and I already read half of the reading material.
I\'m In the dormitory which is not comfortable like my room.

>> I\'m in the dormitory which is not comfortable for me like my room.

I still In Daejun and I will stay here until next Friday.

>> I am still in Daejeon and I will stay here until next Friday.

There are lots of accommodations here which seems like identical apartment.

>> Correct!

I\'m at the 4th floor.

>> I\'m on the fourth floor.

>> OR: My room is located on the fourth floor.

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