I didn't remember what happened in the morning.

2012-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry Nica. I blacked out today morning. I didn't remember at all. When I opened eyes, it was also 7 am like yesterday and I grasped my phone. But I didn't notice my phone's vibration. Actually, I laid my phone aside my head on the bed to wake up in the morning, setting up many alarms. But I didn't hear the alarms at last. I slightly remembered that I took a look at my alarming phone and turned it off. But I never thought that I didn't get the phone grasped by my right hand. I think I am insensible because of sleep. I miss your birght voice. I am eager to build up my English skill. I want to talk with you in English. Plsase, see you tomorrow. Please... It's hot today. Escape the heat from the sun. Bye And how can I check out the homework's answer ??

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!^^ Thank you for this composition. I missed you in class too. I hope I could talk to you tomorrow. Try to answer first the homework and I will send you the answers after. Enjoy your day today!^^  Smile!^^ T. Nica ^^ I\'m sorry Nica. >> Correct! I blacked out today morning. >> I blacked out this morning. I didn\'t remember at all. >> I didn\'t remember anything at all. When I opened eyes, it was also 7 am like yesterday and I grasped my phone. >> When I opened my eyes, it was already 7am like what happened yesterday when I grabbed my phone. But I didn\'t notice my phone\'s vibration.>> Correct! Actually, I laid my phone aside my head on the bed to wake up in the morning, setting up many alarms. >> Actually I placed my phone beside my head on the bed so that I can easily wake up in the morning when it alarms. But I didn\'t hear the alarms at last. >> But I didn\'t hear the alarm. I slightly remembered that I took a look at my alarming phone and turned it off. >> I slightly remembered that I turned off the alarm on my  phone. But I never thought that I didn\'t get the phone grasped by my right hand.>> But I never thought  that I got my phone and did that. I think I am insensible because of sleep.  >> Correct! I miss your bright voice. >> Correct! I am eager to build up my English skill. >> Correct! I want to talk with you in English. >> Correct! Plsase, see you tomorrow. >> I\'ll see you tomorrow. Please... >> Correct! It\'s hot today. >> Correct! Escape the heat from the sun. >> I\'ll try to escape the heat from the sun . Bye>> Correct!And how can I check out the homework\'s answer ?? >> Correct!

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