I do english study for my wealth.
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I do english study for my wealth.
>> I study English for my wealth.
>> OR: I study English to earn money.
I speak english, first reason is that it is fun to speak english like you, American girl.
>> My first reason for studying English is because it\'s fun.
*** Just for the record, I\'m not an American. ^-^
We start english study from a childhood.. it is korean education curiculum. I agree with that.
>> We start to study English from childhood. It\'s part of the Korean education curriculum which I am in favor of.
And studying English is helpful to make money.
>> Correct
>> Studying English provides opportunities to make money.
Thanks for reading.
>> Correct.
>> OR: Thank you for reading.
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