I do english study for my wealth.

2017-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I speak english, first reason is that it is fun to speak english like you, American girl. We start english study from a childhood.. it is korean education curiculum. I agree with that. And studying english is helpful to make money.. thanks for reading..

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Hi [이름]! How\'s your day? Thank you for doing your homework.

Your answer is definitely appropriate to the question. I  just made a few correction for future reference.


Enjoy the rest of the day!

Amanda:)




I do english study for my wealth.

>> I study English for my wealth.

>> OR: I study English to earn money.


I speak english, first reason is that it is fun to speak english like you, American girl.

>> My first reason for studying English is because it\'s fun.


*** Just for the record, I\'m not an American.  ^-^


We start english study from a childhood.. it is korean education curiculum. I agree with that.

>> We start to study English from childhood. It\'s part of the Korean education curriculum which I am in favor of.

 And studying English is helpful to make money.

>> Correct

>> Studying English provides opportunities to make money. 


 Thanks for reading.

>> Correct.

>> OR: Thank you for reading.

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