I do not know certainly.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in school, I got a corporal punishment sometimes.
Yes, I think that is necessary to nuture the child.
강사 첨삭
When I was in school, I got a corporal punishment sometimes.
Yes, I think that is necessary to nuture the child.
Yes, I think it is necessary for teachers to do corporal punishment however it should be rare and not all the time. When I was still a student, I got corporal punishment and it is necessary to nurture a child.
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