I do not know what you mean.

2018-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Whether internet is being or not, My life is all the same. I had a computer at my childhood. Time passes by, the internet imerging. So usuable programe is increasing. But I like the old ways to use computer. The most thing I like after emerging internet , the e-mail and messanger. At that old times, I send message by handwriting, but nowadays it turns just typing on the computer. Thanks for reading.

강사 첨삭

Whether internet is being or not, My life is all the same.
I had a computer at my childhood.
Time passes by, the internet imerging. So usuable programe is increasing. But I like the old ways to use computer.
The most thing I like after emerging internet , the e-mail and messanger.
At that old times, I send message by handwriting, but nowadays it turns just typing on the computer.

I had a computer at my childhood days, time passes by and the internet emerged, a lot of programs are being developed but I like the old ways to use computer. The most thing I like about technology is the convenience to use email and messenger. In the old times, I send a message through hand writing, but now a days we can just type it on the computer.

** Homework meaning/ question meaning:

Do you think it is safe to meet a boyfriend/girlfriend/fiancé in online dating. Online dating = applications used on the internet for people to meet somebody.

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