I don\'t believe ghost is real

2021-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t believe a ghost is real. Because I am weak at scare or creepy thing. When I was young I have been theam park, and my older brother take me to the ghost house. I have so scary memory and that\'s why I don\'t believe ghost isn\'t real.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

Me too. I don\'t believe in ghosts but I am very much afraid of it. Hahaha!

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I don\'t believe a ghost is real.
>> I don\'t believe that ghosts are real.

Because I am weak at scare or creepy thing.

>> I am weak and get scared easily.

When I was young I have been theam park, and my older brother take me to the ghost house.

>> When I was young, me and my brother went to a theme park and entered a ghost house.

I have so scary memory and that\'s why I don\'t believe ghost isn\'t real..

>> I had a very scary experience that\' why I choose to not believe in ghosts.

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