I don\'t bring the camera to the vacation site.

2019-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I have some cameras. I bought it by second hand. I usually don\'t take a picture. There is a sign not to take a picture when I go to somewhere. The photo which I was taken is good at some time when I was idle. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Keep writing ☺

I have some cameras.
>> I have cameras.

I bought it by second hand.
>> I bought a secondhand camera.

I usually don\'t take a picture.
>> I usually don\'t take pictures.

There is a sign not to take a picture when I go to somewhere.
>> There are signs not to take pictures when I go to places.

The photo which I was taken is good at some time when I was idle.
>> The photo that I took was good at some time when I was idle.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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