I don't change my ordinary time into special one.

2018-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I live a ordinary day not a special one. When I am sick and tired of my life, I often go to the movie theater or take a exercise. And I am commonly content with my everyday life. And I am content with your teaching. And it's new day by day. The time when I got home after work is the most hard time. This time is contemporary the most comfort time when I feel after work. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]!


Once again, I thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean~~



I live a ordinary day not a special one.

>> My days are always ordinary. It\'s rare that I experience a special day.


 When I am sick and tired of my life, I often go to the movie theater or take a exercise.

>> When I am sick and tired of my life, I often go to the movie theater or exercise.


 And I am commonly content with my everyday life.

>> And I am usually content with my everyday life.


 And I am content with your teaching. And it\'s new day by day.

>> I am also content with your teaching. There\'s always something new in each session.


The time when I got home after work is the most hard time. This time is contemporary the most comfort time when I feel after work.

>> However, the best time for me is when I get home as this is the most precious by far.


Thanks for reading. Bye.

>> CORRECT


 





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