I don't have any experience about it.

2014-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I told you that in korean society, there are specially moods existing. So I don't have an experience. I wanted to be seen as normal person. I'm not abnormal. My mom can guarantee it. March first is our anniversary to memory our ancestor who devoted one's life and sarcrificed one's life. Freedom is not Free. so our ancestor had fought for free to our nation and us. National flag is hung in every houses. Real patriots were existing in this country so we can grew up and success our life. Giving up one's life is not easy to give a freedom to our country. Their body had gone a longtime ago, but their spirits are with all Korean people's mind.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday to you^^

Thanks for sending in your composition.

I really treasure your appreciation for the heroes of your country.

Independence is priceless.

See you^^

Teacher Nina


I told you that in korean society, there are specially moods existing.

>>I  told you that in Korean society, there are special moods existing.

So I don\'t have an experience.

>> But I do not have such experience.
I wanted to be seen as normal person.

>> I wanted to be seen as a normal person.

I\'m not abnormal.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I do not have strange qualities.

>> OR: I do not have any peculiarities.

My mom can guarantee it.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: My mother can attest to that.
March first is our anniversary to memory our ancestor who devoted one\'s life and sarcrificed one\'s life.

>> March 1st is our anniversary to remember our ancestors who devoted and sacrificed their lives.

Freedom is not Free. so our ancestor had fought for free to our nation and us.

>> Freedom is not free, so our ancestors fought for us to achieve liberation.

>> OR: Freedom has its own price, so our ancestors fought for it.

National flag is hung in every houses.

>> Our national flag is hung on every house.

Real patriots were existing in this country so we can grew up and success our life.

>> Real patriots existed in this country so we could grow up and succeed in our life.

Giving up one\'s life is not easy to give a freedom to our country.

>> Giving up one\'s life is not easy to free one\'s country.
Their body had gone a longtime ago, but their spirits are with all Korean people\'s mind.

>> Their bodies had vanished long time ago, but their spirits are always in Korean people\'s minds.

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