I don\'t have any trust to him...

2022-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Korea have a new president. And he is Yoon Seok Yeoul. My family we don\'t like him truly. And we suppoerted number 1, Lee Jae Myeoung. But I don\'t like him too. Honestly,I feel just wanted to make a better choice than the worst. I don\'t know now I\'m penic I don\'t have any trust to him

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann!

A lot of Koreans have mixed emotions about this actually. Let\'s just hope that he will do a great job during his term.

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Korea have a new president.

>> South Korea has a new president now and he is Yoon Seok-yeoul.

And he is Yoon Seok Yeoul.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

My family we don\'t like him truly.

>> Honestly, me and my family don\'t like him.

And we suppoerted number 1, Lee Jae Myeoung.

>> We supported Lee Jae-myeoung.

But I don\'t like him too.

>> CORRECT

Honestly,I feel just wanted to make a better choice than the worst.

>> Honestly, I just wanted to make a better choice because all of them are not good.

I don\'t know now I\'m penic I don\'t have any trust to him

>> I am panicking now because I don\'t trust him.

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