I don't have special plan.

2012-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 karen

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't have special plan so I'm very bored. So I want to make special plan, but I don't have time. -_- I want to play soccer or baseball but I have many homework. But I'm little be happy because I can do ipad game in weekend. I wiil play baseball game. baseball game is my favorite game. I want to have special plan. Who do give me a special plan?

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름]!!! I hope that you will finish all of your homework before Saturday afternoon so that you will still have time to rest and play. I do hope you will be able to come up with a good plan to fight the boredom. KKKK ^_^ I think I will have a boring week to because I need to fix my very x3 messy room!!! Take care and try to have fun. I will call you again really soon my dear! Bye! 

~t.Karen (.-___-)

I don\'t have special plan so I\'m very bored.

>> ** Use [A] to be specific with the number. 

>> I don\'t have a special plan so I\'m very bored. 

So I want to make special plan, but I don\'t have time. -_-

>> ** Use [A] to be specific with the number. 

>> So I want to make a special plan, but I don\'t have time. 

I want to play soccer or baseball but I have many homework.

>> Correct! ^^ or 

>> I want to play soccer or baseball but I have many homework. 

But I\'m little be happy because I can do ipad game in weekend.

>> ** Be specific with your verb, use [PLAY] instead because it is a more appropriate word for your sentence. 

>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].

>> But I\'m a little happy because I can play in iPad game in the weekend. 

I wiil play baseball game.

>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].

>> I will play a baseball game.

baseball game is my favorite game.

>> ** Capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence. 

>> ** Remove the other word [GAME] because it would be redundant. 

>> Baseball is my favorite game.

I want to have special plan.

>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].

>> I want to have a special plan. 

Who do give me a special plan?

>> ** Use [CAN] to express ability. 

>> Who can give me a special plan? 

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