I don't have special plan.
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Hello there my dear [이름]!!! I hope that you will finish all of your homework before Saturday afternoon so that you will still have time to rest and play. I do hope you will be able to come up with a good plan to fight the boredom. KKKK ^_^ I think I will have a boring week to because I need to fix my very x3 messy room!!! Take care and try to have fun. I will call you again really soon my dear! Bye!
~t.Karen (.-___-)
I don\'t have special plan so I\'m very bored.
>> ** Use [A] to be specific with the number.
>> I don\'t have a special plan so I\'m very bored.
So I want to make special plan, but I don\'t have time. -_-
>> ** Use [A] to be specific with the number.
>> So I want to make a special plan, but I don\'t have time.
I want to play soccer or baseball but I have many homework.
>> Correct! ^^ or
>> I want to play soccer or baseball but I have many homework.
But I\'m little be happy because I can do ipad game in weekend.
>> ** Be specific with your verb, use [PLAY] instead because it is a more appropriate word for your sentence.
>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].
>> But I\'m a little happy because I can play in iPad game in the weekend.
I wiil play baseball game.
>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].
>> I will play a baseball game.
baseball game is my favorite game.
>> ** Capitalize the first letter of the first word of your sentence.
>> ** Remove the other word [GAME] because it would be redundant.
>> Baseball is my favorite game.
I want to have special plan.
>> ** Don\'t forget your article [A].
>> I want to have a special plan.
Who do give me a special plan?
>> ** Use [CAN] to express ability.
>> Who can give me a special plan?
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