I don\'t know
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know the future will be better or not but I wish the future were to be better for our kids
recently there is having two way of positive and negative thing in the same time
negative is pollution and disease and the other side of positive is developing for against to negative thing
that is my opinion
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it. Have a good one. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Do you think the future will be better or worse for your grandchildren? In what ways? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I don\'t know the future will be better or not but I wish the future were to be better for our kids
>>> I do not know whether the future will be better or not but I wish the future will be better for our kids.
recently there is having two way of positive and negative thing in the same time
>>> Recently there have been positive and negative factors affecting the future.
negative is pollution and disease and the other side of positive is developing for against to negative thing
>>> A few negatives are pollution and disease but there are positive things being developed to improve the situation.
that is my opinion
>>> That is my opinion.
Do you think the future will be better or worse for your grandchildren? In what ways? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I don\'t know the future will be better or not but I wish the future were to be better for our kids
>>> I do not know whether the future will be better or not but I wish the future will be better for our kids.
recently there is having two way of positive and negative thing in the same time
>>> Recently there have been positive and negative factors affecting the future.
negative is pollution and disease and the other side of positive is developing for against to negative thing
>>> A few negatives are pollution and disease but there are positive things being developed to improve the situation.
that is my opinion
>>> That is my opinion.
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