I don\'t know.

2024-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think the act of dancing was used by people in the old days to pray to God when they did something magical or wanted something. Now, I think dance is important in all cultures because it feels closely related to people\'s leisure life. To be honest, I don\'t really like dancing, so I don\'t know.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름], 

Your perspective on the historical significance of dancing as a form of prayer is interesting. It\'s true that dance has played a role in various cultures for different purposes. Your acknowledgment of its importance in contemporary culture, particularly as it relates to leisure, is well-noted. 

It\'s completely okay if dancing is not your personal preference. Everyone has their unique interests, and your honesty about your feelings towards dancing is appreciated. 

~Teacher Cathy  

 

I think the act of dancing was used by people in the old days to pray to God when they did something magical or wanted something. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I believe that in ancient times, people used the act of dancing to pray to God, especially when performing something magical or expressing their desires. 

Now, I think dance is important in all cultures because it feels closely related to people\'s leisure life. 

>>Now, I think dance is important in all cultures because it feels closely related to people\'s leisure lives. 

To be honest, I don\'t really like dancing, so I don\'t know. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>To be honest, I don\'t particularly enjoy dancing, so I\'m not sure. 

 

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