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2019-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday my big mom is dead because of old age. So in accordance with this situation I must obey the elderly. I am sorry but it\'s an unexpected affair. Korea is A bureau of eastern court. Sometimes I was victim of gang when I was in elementary school. I remembered. Thanks for reading.Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺

Yesterday my big mom is dead because of old age.

>> My grandmother passed away yesterday because of old age.

So in accordance with this situation I must obey the elderly.

>> So, in accordance with this situation, I must obey the elderly.

I am sorry but it\'s an unexpected affair.

>> CORRECT

Korea is A bureau of eastern court.

>> Korea is a bureau of eastern court.

Sometimes I was victim of gang when I was in elementary school. I remembered.

>> I used be a victim of a gang when I was in elementary school.

Thanks for reading.Bye.

>> Thanks for reading. Bye.

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