I don\'t know about the culture where the unknown people lives in.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young I often watching the TV shows broadcasting the interesting culture that allure my interest.
I learned a bit about the culture of other people who live in other nation which is a far away from our nation.
I am knowing that the negros lives in the U.S.
And the discrimination about the racial problem is some problem in U.S.
I don\'t know at all about that problem because I have never heard at direct about it.
Thanks for reading.
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When I was young I often watching the TV shows broadcasting the interesting culture that allure my interest.
>> When I was young, I often watch TV shows that broadcasts interesting cultures that allure my interest.
>> When I was young, I often watch TV shows that broadcasts interesting cultures that allure my interest.
I learned a bit about the culture of other people who live in other nation which is a far away from our nation.
>> I learned a bit about the culture of other people who live in other nations which are far away from our nation.
>> I learned a bit about the culture of other people who live in other nations which are far away from our nation.
I am knowing that the negros lives in the U.S.
>> I know that there are black Americans in the U.S.
>> I know that there are black Americans in the U.S.
And the discrimination about the racial problem is some problem in U.S.
>> I also know about the discrimination in the U.S.
>> I also know about the discrimination in the U.S.
I don\'t know at all about that problem because I have never heard at direct about it.
>> I didn\'t know all the details until I\'ve heard it.
>> I didn\'t know all the details until I\'ve heard it.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
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