I don\'t know and I\'m not interested about the showing age
학생이 쓴 원문
but according my knowledge, A women live longer than man
There is some causing that women can take care them by oneself
and The story which is women seem looking older than man because
a women have pregnancy
강사 첨삭
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I don\\\'t know and I\\\'m not interested about the showing age
>> I am not exactly interested in appearances as we age.
but according my knowledge, A women live longer than man
>> But according to my knowledge, women live longer than men.
There is some causing that women can take care them by oneself
>> The reason is women take care of themselves more.
and The story which is women seem looking older than man because
a women have pregnancy
>> And the reason women look older than men is that women experience pregnancy.
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