I don't know exactly what your question meaning.

2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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You mean the jobs originated from home? I understood like it. Home-based jobs is a some obscuring word to me. Generally jobs mean that we should make money for a living. We learn a lot from home for example chores and etc. Room cleaning is thought to me that home-based jobs. Home-based job is for me a kind of room cleaning. I don't get accustomed to longer sentence yet. I don't know what sentece is right nor what it expresses is right for what I want to say. Thanks for reading.Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean~~



>> What do you think about home-based jobs? 


You mean the jobs originated from home?

>> Are you referring to jobs that you do at home?

>> [Home-based jobs are the jobs that you can do at home such as translating, teaching online, etc.]


 I understood like it.

>> This is how I understood the question.


 Home-based jobs is a some obscuring word to me.

>> I\'m not familiar with the term \"home-based jobs.\"


 Generally jobs mean that we should make money for a living.

>> Generally, jobs mean that we should make money for a living.


 We learn a lot from home for example chores and etc.

>> We learn a lot from home, for example, chores and other things.


 Room cleaning is thought to me that home-based jobs.

>> I think that cleaning the room is a home-based job.


 Home-based job is for me a kind of room cleaning.

>> Cleaning the room is a kind of home-based job for me.


 I don\'t get accustomed to longer sentence yet.

>> I\'m not yet  accustomed to making longer sentences.


 I don\'t know what sentece is right nor what it expresses is right for what I want to say.

>> I don\'t know what sentences are considered correct. Nor do I know if the sentences I make, expresses accurately what I want to say.


 Thanks for reading. Bye.

>> OR: I appreciate your reading my composition. Cheers!

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