I don't know exactly what your question meaning.
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>> What do you think about home-based jobs?
You mean the jobs originated from home?
>> Are you referring to jobs that you do at home?
>> [Home-based jobs are the jobs that you can do at home such as translating, teaching online, etc.]
I understood like it.
>> This is how I understood the question.
Home-based jobs is a some obscuring word to me.
>> I\'m not familiar with the term \"home-based jobs.\"
Generally jobs mean that we should make money for a living.
>> Generally, jobs mean that we should make money for a living.
We learn a lot from home for example chores and etc.
>> We learn a lot from home, for example, chores and other things.
Room cleaning is thought to me that home-based jobs.
>> I think that cleaning the room is a home-based job.
Home-based job is for me a kind of room cleaning.
>> Cleaning the room is a kind of home-based job for me.
I don\'t get accustomed to longer sentence yet.
>> I\'m not yet accustomed to making longer sentences.
I don\'t know what sentece is right nor what it expresses is right for what I want to say.
>> I don\'t know what sentences are considered correct. Nor do I know if the sentences I make, expresses accurately what I want to say.
Thanks for reading. Bye.
>> OR: I appreciate your reading my composition. Cheers!
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