I don't know how I make sense.

2011-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Yesterday was a very important holiday for Koreans. While under Japanese colonial rule, many innocent Koreans were sacrificed. During school days, even we used to have a Japanese antipathy due to their cruelties. That's why we still get mad about matchs with Japan. But I feel ashamed nowadays. As time goes by, many people consider important holidays like yesterday as Just red days not to work and I might one of them. As if we forgive it, we become forgotten their thankfulness. How stupid we are! And it's kind of ironic that I like Japanese dramas. I'm getting along with Japanese friends. However, I don't want to talk about the history with them. Some couldn't say that they like Japanes culture a few years ago. Neither did I. I was afraid that I looked a betrayer.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! We are all wounded of the past. We are also once a colony of Japan until the Americans helped us have our independence. But we are already in the 20th century so things are different. We should all bridge our differences. -Tiny^0^ Yesterday was a very important holiday for Koreans. >>correctWhile under Japanese colonial rule, many innocent Koreans were sacrificed. >>correctDuring school days, even we used to have a Japanese antipathy due to their cruelties. >>correctThat's why we still get mad about matchs with Japan. >> That's why we still get mad about matches with Japan. >>spelling check: matchesBut I feel ashamed nowadays. >>correctAs time goes by, many people consider important holidays like yesterday as Just red days not to work and I might one of them. >> As time goes by, many people are considering important holidays like yesterday as just red days or non-working days and I might be one of them.As if we forgive it, we become forgotten their thankfulness. >>As we disregard it, we start to forget how we should be thankful to them. How stupid we are! >>correctAnd it's kind of ironic that I like Japanese dramas. >>correct^-^kkI'm getting along with Japanese friends. >>correctHowever, I don't want to talk about the history with them. >correctSome couldn't say that they like Japanes culture a few years ago. >>correct. >>spelling check: JapaneseNeither did I. >>correct I was afraid that I looked a betrayer. >> I was afraid that I might look like a betrayer.

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