I don't know how I make sense.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday was a very important holiday for Koreans.
While under Japanese colonial rule, many innocent Koreans were sacrificed.
During school days, even we used to have a Japanese antipathy due to their cruelties.
That's why we still get mad about matchs with Japan.
But I feel ashamed nowadays.
As time goes by, many people consider important holidays like yesterday as Just red days not to work and I might one of them.
As if we forgive it, we become forgotten their thankfulness.
How stupid we are!
And it's kind of ironic that I like Japanese dramas.
I'm getting along with Japanese friends.
However, I don't want to talk about the history with them.
Some couldn't say that they like Japanes culture a few years ago.
Neither did I. I was afraid that I looked a betrayer.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
We are all wounded of the past.
We are also once a colony of Japan until the Americans helped us have our independence.
But we are already in the 20th century so things are different.
We should all bridge our differences.
-Tiny^0^
Yesterday was a very important holiday for Koreans.
>>correctWhile under Japanese colonial rule, many innocent Koreans were sacrificed.
>>correctDuring school days, even we used to have a Japanese antipathy due to their cruelties.
>>correctThat's why we still get mad about matchs with Japan.
>> That's why we still get mad about matches with Japan.
>>spelling check: matchesBut I feel ashamed nowadays.
>>correctAs time goes by, many people consider important holidays like yesterday as Just red days not to work and I might one of them.
>> As time goes by, many people are considering important holidays like yesterday as just red days or non-working days and I might be one of them.As if we forgive it, we become forgotten their thankfulness.
>>As we disregard it, we start to forget how we should be thankful to them.
How stupid we are!
>>correctAnd it's kind of ironic that I like Japanese dramas.
>>correct^-^kkI'm getting along with Japanese friends.
>>correctHowever, I don't want to talk about the history with them.
>correctSome couldn't say that they like Japanes culture a few years ago.
>>correct.
>>spelling check: JapaneseNeither did I.
>>correct
I was afraid that I looked a betrayer.
>> I was afraid that I might look like a betrayer.
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