I don\'t know how my country would be developed.
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My country is good place to live as I think.
>> My country is a good place to live, I think.
Korea is good place that is full of pure water and many mountains.
>> Korea is a good place to live because it is surrounded by water and mountains.
I think the natural resources are more abundant in America.
>> CORRECT
So I think U.S. help us in many sides.
>> So, I think U.S. helps us in many ways.
I forgot about your questions you asked in the class.
>> I forgot about the question you asked me in class last time.
>> OR: I forgot about your question.
Sorry. I am so busy to study english I forget your question.
>> Sorry, I am so busy studying English that I forgot your question.
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>> CORRECT
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