I don\'t know how my country would be developed.

2019-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

My country is good place to live as I think. Korea is good place that is full of pure water and many mountains. I think the natural resources are more abundant in America. So I think U.S. help us in many sides. I forgot about your questions you asked in the class. Sorry. I am so busy to study english I forget your question. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


My country is good place to live as I think.

>> My country is a good place to live, I think.


Korea is good place that is full of pure water and many mountains.

>> Korea is a good place to live because it is surrounded by water and mountains.


I think the natural resources are more abundant in America.

>> CORRECT


So I think U.S. help us in many sides.

>> So, I think U.S. helps us in many ways.


I forgot about your questions you asked in the class.

>> I forgot about the question you asked me in class last time.

>> OR: I forgot about your question.


Sorry. I am so busy to study english I forget your question.

>> Sorry, I am so busy studying English that I forgot your question.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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