I don't know the exact reason why friends compete each other.

2018-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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The one at least if that is belongs to human must struggle for life, I agree with that opinion. The bible says that the man must struggle for life and women must bear a torture of births of baby. This message reminds me till now from the moment I read it. This question is not interesting to me or so. Your question leads me to think philosophically. I am studying hard in public library nowadays. And your teaching is very good and nice more than anything. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름] !~~


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean^^



The one at least if that is belongs to human must struggle for life, I agree with that opinion.

>> I agree with the saying that humans must struggle to live.


 The bible says that the man must struggle for life and women must bear a torture of births of baby.

>> The bible says that the man must struggle to live whereas the woman must bear the pains of giving birth.


 This message reminds me till now from the moment I read it.

>> This passage is still fresh in my mind since the moment I read it.


 This question is not interesting to me or so.

>> I don\'t find this question very interesting.


 Your question leads me to think philosophically.

>> CORRECT


 I am studying hard in public library nowadays.

>> I am studying hard in the public library nowadays.


 And your teaching is very good and nice more than anything. 

>> I find your teaching suitable for me.
 

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