I don't know well about that matter.
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Jean
In my free time, I went to garaoke to express my emotions and besides kick my stress off.
>> In my free time, I usually go to a karaoke to express my emotions and release my stress.
I remember the song emotions which song by mary carry , I don\'t know the exact spell of singer\'s name.
>> I remember the emotions from the songs by Mariah Carey (I don\'t know the exact spelling of the singer\'s name).
I don\'t know well about hiding emotions, sometimes I feel some kind of weirdness and sometimes I feel like I am in fault reason.
>> I\'m not good at hiding my emotions; I sometimes feel weird and at times I feel as if I were the one at fault.
I had been to mental hospital but now I think I am o.k.
>> I had been to a mental hospital but I think I\'m better now.
>> or: I used to see a psychiatrist but I believe I\'m a lot better now.
what about you on me? I just wonder and fall to in pit of thought. I don\'t know why I do like this.
>> What about you? I wonder if you\'re you good at hiding your emotions?
I think that my manner to woman has some trouble or so.
>> I think that I\'m not good at interacting with women.
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