I don't know well about that matter.

2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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In my free time, I went to garaoke to express my emotions and besides kick my stress off. I remember the song emotions which song by mary carry , I don't know the exact spell of singer's name. I don't know well about hiding emotions, sometimes I feel some kind of weirdness and sometimes I feel like I am in fault reason. I had been to mental hospital but now I think I am o.k. what about you on me? I just wonder and fall to in pit of thought. I don't know why I do like this. I think that my manner to woman has some trouble or so. anyway, Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean


In my free time, I went to garaoke to express my emotions and besides kick my stress off.

>> In my free time, I usually go to a karaoke to express my emotions and release my stress.


 I remember the song emotions which song by mary carry , I don\'t know the exact spell of singer\'s name.

>> I remember the emotions from the songs by Mariah Carey (I don\'t know the exact spelling of the singer\'s name).


I don\'t know well about hiding emotions, sometimes I feel some kind of weirdness and sometimes I feel like I am in fault reason.

>> I\'m not good at hiding my emotions; I sometimes feel weird and at times I feel as if I were the one at fault.


 I had been to mental hospital but now I think I am o.k.

>> I had been to a mental hospital but I think I\'m better now.

>> or: I used to see a psychiatrist but I believe I\'m a lot better now.


 what about you on me? I just wonder and fall to in pit of thought. I don\'t know why I do like this.

>> What about you? I wonder if you\'re you good at hiding your emotions?


 I think that my manner to woman has some trouble or so.

>> I think that I\'m not good at interacting with women.

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