I don't know well, I am not a athlete.
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The exercise is important to life.
But I have not thinking about the person who work on exercise.
I think they have a more trained body.. just kidding..
Exercise is hard and after doing I feel tired. It\'s an agony of body.. Really..
At this point of view, I agree that the athlete deserve to a big money.
Thanks for reading. What are you think about this?
Exercising is important to life. But I have not thought of working out. I think they have more trained body. Exercise is hard and after that I would feel very exhausted and it\'s an agony. At this point of view, I agree that athletes deserve high salary.
* It is difficult to be a successful athlete, also it is not a stable job, once they injured their body they couldn\'t play anymore, also athletes retire in an early age. These are some of the reasons why they get a high salary. *
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