I don\'t know well that I have something that can be changed my life but I have small thing affected

2020-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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there is no anything that can change in my lifestyle my lifestyle is changed a little bit by the world issue and I think that have changed the a lot of peoples of lifestyle. have to get marks and need to hand washing that make to change our lifestyle more worse than before but we have to adjust this way to live

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Hi, [이름]. I agree with you. The pandemic has changed a lot of people and we have to adjust to this kind of lifestyle now. Thank you for the time you spent to do this homework, I appreciate it. I hope you get as much sleep as you need tonight. Take it easy. Have a good night. ~Teacher Jane c\",) 


there is no anything that can change in my lifestyle
>>> There is nothing that can change my lifestyle. 

my lifestyle is changed a little bit by the world issue and I think that have changed the a lot of peoples of lifestyle.
>>> My lifestyle has changed a little because of the world\'s issues and I think that also changed a lot of people\'s lifestyles. 

have to get marks and need to hand washing
>>> We have to wear a mask and wash our hands often. 

that make to change our lifestyle more worse than before
>>> It makes our lifestyle worse than before. 

but we have to adjust this way to live
>>> But we have to adjust to this way of life now. 

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