I don\'t know what the changes that my wishes cause.

2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I have had a lot of wishes since I was young. And some of them are fulfulled and others vanished away. I always wish some fantastic dreams and I also like to do it. In todays\' world is full of people. So we can communicate with other easily comparing to old days. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks again for doing your homework.

I hope you\'re having a great night ☺

I have had a lot of wishes since I was young.
>> I have had a lot of wishes when I was young.

And some of them are fulfulled and others vanished away.
>> Some of them were fulfilled but the others weren\'t.

I always wish some fantastic dreams and I also like to do it.
>> I\'ve wished for some fantastic dreams.

In todays\' world is full of people.
>> There are a lot of people in the world.

So we can communicate with other easily comparing to old days.
>> So, we\'re able to communicate with others easily now than before.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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