I don\'t know what the terror is.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to take care of my body.
Bush stuck to his guns to continue the war on terror.
I watch many terror in the TV.
They are fighting with guns towards innocent people and police.
It is main topic of entertainment\'s movies.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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I want to take care of my body.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Bush stuck to his guns to continue the war on terror.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I watch many terror in the TV.
>> I\'ve seen a lot of terror on TV.
>> I\'ve seen a lot of terror on TV.
They are fighting with guns towards innocent people and police.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
It is main topic of entertainment\'s movies.
>> It is the main topic the entertainment movies.
>> It is the main topic the entertainment movies.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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