I don't know why they are crying for.

2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Weep or crying is natural sign of body. Other people may want something else whereas someone want different one. We want something as we desire. Only God knows it. When someone miss the precious thing it's the time for sorrow. Game program is so that we can miss something. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺

Talk to you tomorrow ♥

Weep or crying is natural sign of body.
>> Weeping or crying is normal for us.

Other people may want something else whereas someone want different one.

>> Other people may want something else whereas someone wants something different.

We want something as we desire.

>> We want something that we desire.

Only God knows it.
>> CORRECT

When someone miss the precious thing it\'s the time for sorrow.

>> When someone misses a precious thing it\'s the time for sorrow.

Game program is so that we can miss something.
>> It is programmed so we do it when we miss someone or something.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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