I don’t like e-books.
학생이 쓴 원문
No. I think the internet can get rid of jobs, but I don\'t think it will make books disappear. Because there are more people who read print books than people who read e-books, and more people prefer print books. I don\'t like e-books. Because it seems that it would be better to do other SNS with an electronic device than to read a book with an electronic device.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
No. I think the internet can get rid of jobs, but I don\'t think it will make books disappear.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there are more people who read print books than people who read e-books, and more people prefer print books.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like e-books.
>>> CORRECT!
Because it seems that it would be better to do other SNS with an electronic device than to read a book with an electronic device.
>>> CORRECT!
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