I don\'t like horror movie.
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I don\'t like horror movie. But, I saw \'Annabelle\' with my middle school friends.
Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like ghost.
I was so scared, especially it moves at the night.
So, after watching this movie, I don\'t put the doll looks like human in my room.
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Hi Kara!
Andrea
Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like ghosts.
I was so scared, especially it moves at the night.
So, after watching this movie, I don\'t put the doll looks like human in my room.
I also do not watch horror movies, especially when I am alone.
They give me nightmares.
Andrea
I don\'t like horror movie. But, I saw \'Annabelle\' with my middle school friends.
>> I don\'t like horror movies. But I saw \'Annabelle\' with my middle school friends.
Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like ghosts.
>> Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like a ghost.
I was so scared, especially it moves at the night.
>> I was so scared, especially when it moved at night.
So, after watching this movie, I don\'t put the doll looks like human in my room.
>> So, after watching this movie, I don\'t put the doll that looks like a human in my room.
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