I don\'t like shopping.
학생이 쓴 원문
Frankly I don\'t like shopping, So sometimes I don\'t understand people who do a lot of shopping.
If I need something to buy, I ask someone to buy it instead of buying it.
I\'ve rare bought clothes, shoes and electronic devices by myself. But I have grocery shopping.
강사 첨삭
H[이름]!
Do you do online shopping or do you go to department stores?
Maybe, online shopping would be ,ore suitable for you.^^
Thank you for sharing your ideas today.
I\'ll see you in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Frankly I don\'t like shopping, So sometimes I don\'t understand people who do a lot of shopping.
>> Frankly I don\'t like shopping so sometimes, I don\'t understand people who do a lot of shopping.
If I need something to buy, I ask someone to buy it instead of buying it.
If I need something to buy, I ask someone to buy it instead of buying it.
>> If I need to buy something, I ask someone to buy it instead of buying it myself.
I\'ve rare bought clothes, shoes and electronic devices by myself.
I\'ve rare bought clothes, shoes and electronic devices by myself.
>> I rarely buy clothes, shoes and electronic devices myself.
But I have grocery shopping.
>> However, I sometimes go grocery shopping.
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