I don\'t like strong scents like hair loss prevention, and the smell of the sewers after the rain.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hair loss prevention shampoo has very strong scents, so if we use this shampoo, our hair feel so cool. It also good for our hair condition, but the scents is so strong, so I can\'t breath if we use this shampoo so much, and I feel so dizzy when I take a shower.
The smell of the sewers is disgusting even when it\'s not raining, but after it rains, the smell permeates the whole body. That\'s why I don\'t like raining day...^^;;
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
These two are indeed stinky! At least your hair is so thick so you do not have to use the hair loss shampoo. However, sometimes, we encounter the sewers when we go outside. Today, the use of face mask is an advantage to these odors.
I am happy for this composition, thanks so much and see you again tomorrow!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The smell of the sewers is disgusting even when it\'s not raining, but after it rains, the smell permeates the whole body.
It also good for our hair condition, but the scents is so strong, so I can\'t breath if we use this shampoo so much, and I feel so dizzy when I take a shower.
>> It is also good for our hair condition, but the scent is so strong, so I can\'t breath if I use this shampoo so much and I feel so dizzy when I take a shower.
The smell of the sewers is disgusting even when it\'s not raining, but after it rains, the smell permeates the whole body.
>> Correct!
That\'s why I don\'t like raining day...^^;;
>> Correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.