I don\'t like that situation....because...
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had a friend who was more confident than me, it would be a little... little uncomfortable. There is a friend in my class named Jihoo Lee, who was chosen as a good student in the class. And she had a lively personality and was cute, so she was popular with children. That friend and I were chosen to be in the same class when we were in the second year of middle school, so we both became uncomfortable. I am belong to the upper-intermediate level in my studies, and she is like that, so the two of us always raised our hands when giving a presentation or when the teacher ordered errands. Every time it happened, I got a little annoyed, but we had to pretend we were okay, so we both pretended to be close in class and always fought outside. It was so hard, but I couldn\'t help it. Because this is my personality. I know my personality well. I\'m an extrovert, so it\'s hard to keep my hips in my chair. If there is a friend who is smarter than me in front of me,I don\'t think I\'ll stand still.
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
Being with a person as smart or smarter than you can be uncomfortable at the same time a privilege because this person can challenge you. As a result, you have to do better because you also want to beat her/him in the game. Well, in the first place, comparing yourself to others can be unfair because no two people are the same. So work hard, be smart and keep learning. The more skills you have, the more experiences you can gain.
I am grateful for this answer, well done!
-T. Donna =)
>> If I had a friend who has more confidence than me, it would be a little uncomfortable.
There is a friend in my class named Jihoo Lee, who was chosen as a good student in the class.
>> Correct!
And she had a lively personality and was cute, so she was popular with children.
>> Correct!
That friend and I were chosen to be in the same class when we were in the second year of middle school, so we both became uncomfortable.
>> Correct!
I am belong to the upper-intermediate level in my studies, and she is like that, so the two of us always raised our hands when giving a presentation or when the teacher ordered errands.
>> Correct!
Every time it happened, I got a little annoyed, but we had to pretend we were okay, so we both pretended to be close in class and always fought outside.
>> Correct!
It was so hard, but I couldn\'t help it. Because this is my personality.
>> Correct!
Or: It was so hard, but I couldn\'t help it because this is my personality.
I know my personality well. I\'m an extrovert, so it\'s hard to keep my hips in my chair.
>> Correct!
If there is a friend who is smarter than me in front of me,I don\'t think I\'ll stand still.
>> Correct!
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