I don\'t like to go on business trips abroad
학생이 쓴 원문
> Do you enjoy going on business trips overseas? Why so?
*** Well. I was done this assay yesterday. But may be there is something wrong of saving.
No. I don\'t like to go on business trips abroad. Most of the cases I should take a flight if there is business trip to abroad. In that case I should wait for a long time to take a flight. And took a flight very long time. It is really boring and tired. After arriving at other countries I should move for a long time to meeting destination. Moreover I should prepare presentation without rest time.
Moreover meeting is not easy always in face to face meeting. Because face to face meeting means that the issue is critical. Anyway meeting will hold 2 or 3 days. And then I come back with a lot of homework which is produced during the meeting. And the worst thing is I should take a flight long time again.
So I can\'t like abroad business trip.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. Going on a business trip abroad definitely takes a lot of time and effort.
- T. Beth
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No. I don\'t like to go on business trips abroad. >>> No, I don\'t like going on business trips abroad.
Most of the cases I should take a flight if there is business trip to abroad.
>>> Most of the cases, I should take the plane if there is a business trip to abroad.
In that case I should wait for a long time to take a flight.
>>> In that case, I should wait for a long time to take a flight.
And took a flight very long time.
>>> And the flight take s along time.
It is really boring and tired.
>>> It is really boring and tiring.
After arriving at other countries I should move for a long time to meeting destination.
>>> After arriving at other countries, I should move for a long time to the meeting destination.
Moreover I should prepare presentation without rest time.
>>> correct
Moreover meeting is not easy always in face to face meeting.
Moreover meeting is not easy always in face to face meeting.
>>> In addition, meeting is not easy when done face to face.
Because face to face meeting means that the issue is critical.
>>> correct
Anyway meeting will hold 2 or 3 days.
>>> correct
And then I come back with a lot of homework which is produced during the meeting.
>>> Then I come back with a lot of homework which are produced during the meeting.
And the worst thing is I should take a flight long time again.
>>> In addition to that, the worst thing is I should take a flight for a long time again.
So I can\'t like abroad business trip.
>>> So I can\'t possibly like abroad business trips.
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