I don\'t like video game!
학생이 쓴 원문
l like watching TV than playing video game. l\'m not interested in games. And after COVID-19, OTT services such as Netflix became active and I enjoyed watching dramas. But my favorite thing is watching YouTube.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You did well in this composition.
Look at some of the suggestions in these sentences.
I have given you ways on how to properly construct sentences.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
l like watching TV than playing video game.
>> I like watching TV more than playing video games.
I\'m not interested in games.
>> Correct
And after COVID-19, OTT services such as Netflix became active and I enjoyed watching dramas.
>> Also, after COVID-19, OTT services such as Netflix became popular and I enjoyed watching different kinds of shows.
But my favorite thing is watching YouTube.
>> However, my favorite thing to watch is YouTube.
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