I don\'t make much effort.

2024-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Confidence is what gives you courage when you want to do something. I don\'t put much effort into it, but sometimes I think of people who believe in me when it\'s really hard. So, I\'ll quickly regain your confidence.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for your honest thoughts about confidence. It\'s clear that you recognize its importance in giving you the courage to take action. It’s completely understandable to struggle with putting in effort sometimes, but remembering the people who believe in you can be a powerful motivator. I can see the progress in your English, keep up the good work! I\'ll see you in our next class.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Confidence is what gives you courage when you want to do something.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Confidence is what gives you the courage to take action when you want to achieve something.

I don\'t put much effort into it, but sometimes I think of people who believe in me when it\'s really hard.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I don\'t put much effort into it, but sometimes I think about the people who believe in me when things get really tough.

So, I\'ll quickly regain your confidence.

>>So I quickly regain my confidence.

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