I don\'t mind what I am doing.

2019-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t think about self-confidence specially when I am doing something. Creativity makes many convinient things to our life. I like English because it\'s a second language. I must translate some homework to korean within one week. Today I studied korean history, too. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a great day ☺


I don\'t think about self-confidence specially when I am doing something.

>> I don\'t really think about it when I am doing something


Creativity makes many convinient things to our life.

>> Creativity makes many convenient things in our life.


I like English because it\'s a second language.

>> I like English because it\'s an international second language.


I must translate some homework to korean within one week.

>> I must translate some homework to Korean within one week.


Today I studied korean history, too.

>> Today, I studied Korean history, too.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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