I don't need to push back.

2011-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~ Teacher :D I don't need to push back today's class any more. I didn't go to interview nor call Power Englsih's manager. I consulted my friend about that position I applied for yesterday night. She is in the same boat. So she seriously thought about this with me. And she told me that it is too expensive to live and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city. The crucial reason is that I might not really desire it. I have failed to interview several times and then I feel nervous of interview or getting a job. But I'm okay. If I get a job, I don't have time to study English like these days. Even though I don't need English when I get a job, I really desire to speak English more fluently. I don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire, though!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Well it's okay. I think you made a good deliberation about the offer. It's good that you have considered a lot of things before you finally take a step. You are right, you need not to rush things. You'll find the right job for you, you'll see. -Tiny^-^v Hello~ Teacher :DI don't need to push back today's class any more. >> I don't need to push back today's class anymore. I didn't go to interview nor call Power Englsih's manager. >>correct >>(Just spelling check on English)I consulted my friend about that position I applied for yesterday night. >>correctShe is in the same boat. >>correctSo she seriously thought about this with me. >>correctAnd she told me that it is too expensive to live and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city. >> And she told me that it is too expensive to live in Seoul and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city.The crucial reason is that I might not really desire it. >>correctI have failed to interview several times and then I feel nervous of interview or getting a job. >>I have failed several job interviews and I feel nervous whenever I'm having one (job interview). But I'm okay. >>correctIf I get a job, I don't have time to study English like these days. >> If I get a job, I won't have time to study English like these days. Even though I don't need English when I get a job, I really desire to speak English more fluently. >>correctI don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire, though! >>correct but you don't need to put the comma (,) ^0^ >> I don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire though!

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