I don't need to push back.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~ Teacher :D
I don't need to push back today's class any more.
I didn't go to interview nor call Power Englsih's manager.
I consulted my friend about that position I applied for yesterday night.
She is in the same boat.
So she seriously thought about this with me.
And she told me that it is too expensive to live and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city.
The crucial reason is that I might not really desire it.
I have failed to interview several times and then I feel nervous of interview or getting a job.
But I'm okay.
If I get a job, I don't have time to study English like these days.
Even though I don't need English when I get a job, I really desire to speak English more fluently.
I don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire, though!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Well it's okay.
I think you made a good deliberation about the offer.
It's good that you have considered a lot of things before you finally take a step.
You are right, you need not to rush things.
You'll find the right job for you, you'll see.
-Tiny^-^v
Hello~ Teacher :DI don't need to push back today's class any more.
>> I don't need to push back today's class anymore.
I didn't go to interview nor call Power Englsih's manager.
>>correct
>>(Just spelling check on English)I consulted my friend about that position I applied for yesterday night.
>>correctShe is in the same boat.
>>correctSo she seriously thought about this with me.
>>correctAnd she told me that it is too expensive to live and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city.
>> And she told me that it is too expensive to live in Seoul and I couldn't cover it as a fresher even in unfamiliar city.The crucial reason is that I might not really desire it.
>>correctI have failed to interview several times and then I feel nervous of interview or getting a job.
>>I have failed several job interviews and I feel nervous whenever I'm having one (job interview). But I'm okay.
>>correctIf I get a job, I don't have time to study English like these days.
>> If I get a job, I won't have time to study English like these days.
Even though I don't need English when I get a job, I really desire to speak English more fluently.
>>correctI don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire, though!
>>correct but you don't need to put the comma (,) ^0^
>> I don't know why my English skill is not as same as my desire though!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.