I don’t rearrange my room often.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t rearrange my room often.
I usually rearrange my bedroom once a year.
This is because rearranging is very difficult and needs many efforts.
So, I usually do with my mother and brother.
Personally, I like to decorate my room than rearranging my room.
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I don\'t rearrange my room often.
>> Correct
I usually rearrange my bedroom once a year.
>> Correct
This is because rearranging is very difficult and needs many efforts.
>> This is because rearranging is very difficult and it needs a lot of effort.
So, I usually do with my mother and brother.
>> I usually do this with my mother and brother.
Personally, I like to decorate my room than rearranging my room.
>> Personally, I like to decorate rather than rearrange my room.
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