I don\'t receive any stresses or fatigues.
학생이 쓴 원문
I regularly eat pill which is treated by hospital for my health.
I like studying English and doing computer.
Today I went to the movie theater wishing a refreshments.
The showing time was more long as I expected.
It starts snowing in these days.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. Keep it up!^_^
I don\\\'t receive any stresses or fatigues.
>>>I don\'t have any stresses or fatigues.
I regularly eat pill which is treated by hospital for my health.
>>>I regularly take a pill for my health which is treated in the hospital.
Today I went to the movie theater wishing a refreshments.
>>>Today, I went to the movie theater wishing for refreshments.
The showing time was more long as I expected.
>>>The viewing time was longer than I expected.
It starts snowing in these days.
>>>It started snowing these days.
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