I don't remember what I did during last week

2013-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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1) Jack had fun at the party last Saturday. 2) I'm sorry, but I have to go now. 3) Have you ever been to Canada? 4) Dave passed his driving test. 5) Can we have the bill, please? 6) The match had already started when we arrived. 7) They have breakfast at 6:30 this morning. 8) Do you have a brother? 9) My boss never has time. 10) Doris has been waiting for Pam for 20 minutes now. I hope to tell you about something occured during last week. but I can't tell you. Of course It is a little confidential, The most Important thing is I don't remember. I always do same thing. actually it is not the exactly same work, but It seems like same work. I spread some poll to enroll some educational course, to announce some information, to advertise APT. I think It is not important. I know It is needed even it is now important. but there are too many documents to research them. Time goes like bullet, when I'm in my place is not. It is like routine. endurance power is needed to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Good morning!

How are you doing today?

I hope you are doing great.

Thank you for doing doing homework and please don\'t forget to answer all the questions. =)

Take care, always... See you later! 

Just keep up the good work and all your efforts will soon pay off. Keep moving forward!^^

-- T. Nina ^_^

Please check the corrections I made.

1) Jack had fun at the party last Saturday.

>>Correct!
2) I\'m sorry, but I have to go now.

>>Correct!!

3) Have you ever been to Canada?

>>Correct!!
4) Dave passed his driving test.

>>has
5) Can we have the bill, please?

>>Correct!!
6) The match had already started when we arrived.

>>Correct!!
7) They have breakfast at 6:30 this morning.

>>had
8) Do you have a brother?

>>Correct!!
9) My boss never has time.

>>Correct!!
10) Doris has been waiting for Pam for 20 minutes now.
>>Correct!!

I hope to tell you about something occured during last week.

>>I hope to tell you something that occurred/happened last week.
but I can\'t tell you.

>>But I can\'t tell it to you. ^^
Of course It is a little confidential, The most Important thing is I don\'t remember.

>>Of course it is somewhat confidential and the most important thing is what I don\'t remember.
I always do same thing.

>>I always do the same thing.

actually it is not the exactly same work, but It seems like same work.

>>Actually, it is not the usual work that I do but it seems like it. 
I spread some poll to enroll some educational course, to announce some information, to advertise APT.
>>I distribute flyers to encourage others to enroll in some educational courses, to announce some information, or to advertise APT. 
I think It is not important.
>>I think it is not important, though. 
I know It is needed even it is now important.
>>I know others need it even if it is not so important.
but there are too many documents to research them.
>>But there are too many documents that you have to research from.
Time goes like bullet, when I\'m in my place is not.
>>Time flies like an arrow, but when I\'m in my place, it is not so.  
It is like routine. endurance power is needed to me.

>> It is like a routine. I need the power to endure it.

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