I don't remember what I did during last week
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강사 첨삭
Hi! Good morning!
How are you doing today?
I hope you are doing great.
Thank you for doing doing homework and please don\'t forget to answer all the questions. =)
Take care, always... See you later!
Just keep up the good work and all your efforts will soon pay off. Keep moving forward!^^
-- T. Nina ^_^
Please check the corrections I made.
1) Jack had fun at the party last Saturday.
>>Correct!
2) I\'m sorry, but I have to go now.
3) Have you ever been to Canada?
>>Correct!!
4) Dave passed his driving test.
>>has
5) Can we have the bill, please?
>>Correct!!
6) The match had already started when we arrived.
>>Correct!!
7) They have breakfast at 6:30 this morning.
>>had
8) Do you have a brother?
>>Correct!!
9) My boss never has time.
>>Correct!!
10) Doris has been waiting for Pam for 20 minutes now.
>>Correct!!
I hope to tell you about something occured during last week.
>>I hope to tell you something that occurred/happened last week.
but I can\'t tell you.
>>But I can\'t tell it to you. ^^
Of course It is a little confidential, The most Important thing is I don\'t remember.
>>Of course it is somewhat confidential and the most important thing is what I don\'t remember.
I always do same thing.
>>I always do the same thing.
actually it is not the exactly same work, but It seems like same work.
>>Actually, it is not the usual work that I do but it seems like it.
I spread some poll to enroll some educational course, to announce some information, to advertise APT.
>>I distribute flyers to encourage others to enroll in some educational courses, to announce some information, or to advertise APT.
I think It is not important.
>>I think it is not important, though.
I know It is needed even it is now important.
>>I know others need it even if it is not so important.
but there are too many documents to research them.
>>But there are too many documents that you have to research from.
Time goes like bullet, when I\'m in my place is not.
>>Time flies like an arrow, but when I\'m in my place, it is not so.
It is like routine. endurance power is needed to me.
>> It is like a routine. I need the power to endure it.
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