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1. He likes to eat apples, oranges and bananas.
>>correct
2. Having spoken to him earlier, I was not surprised to hear the news.
>>correct
3. This dish, when prepared correctly is very tasty.
>>correct
4. We enjoy sailing but, we enjoy swimming even more.
>> We enjoy sailing, but we enjoy swimming even more.
5. Robert, the son of the painter, is 35 years old.
>>correct
>>I decide to visit Daegu which is located in the middle of my hometown and base.
It needs more costs, on the other hands there is not a detour course.
>>It costs more; on the other hand, there is no detour.
eventually, It took a almost same time. but I satisfied with it.
>>Eventually, it took almost the same time, but I am satisfied with it.
I realized that the best way to go home is driving own car.
>>I realized that the best way to go home is to drive my car.
It is more costly way which isn\'t needed additional time.
>>It costs additional time to travel which is not needed.
I quote some phrase, \"Time is Gold\"
>>I quote the phrase, \"Time is Gold.\"
>>If I spend a lot, definitely, it will take time.
By the way, I tell more story about my weekend.
>>By the way, I will tell more stories about my weekend.
At last, I arrived at home where my family are welcoming me.
>>At last, I arrived home, where my family welcomes me.
My father bought duck meat, mother made wonderful soup.
>>My father bought a duck meat and my mother made a wonderful soup.
and grand mother brought some food from her house.
>>My grandmother brought some food from her house.
I really enjoyed every meal I ate.
>>Correct!
OR >> I really enjoyed all the dishes they prepared.
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