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2013-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1. He likes to eat apples, oranges and bananas. 2. Having spoken to him earlier, I was not surprised to hear the news. 3. This dish, when prepared correctly is very tasty. 4. We enjoy sailing but, we enjoy swimming even more. 5. Robert, the son of the painter, is 35 years old. I decided to visit Daegu which is in the middle of between my hometown and base. It needs more costs, on the other hands there is not a detour course. eventually, It took a almost same time. but I satisfied with it. I realized that the best way to go home is driving own car. It is more costly way which isn't needed additional time. I quote some phrase, "Time is Gold" Even I will spend more money, actually I will earn a time. By the way, I tell more story about my weekend. At last, I arrived at home where my family are welcoming me. My father bought duck meat, mother made wonderful soup. and grand mother brought some food from her house. I really enjoyed every meal I ate.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

Great job on your homework!!!

Continue sharing great ideas and lovely thoughts.

Have a great day ahead of you.

See you in my class!

T.Nina^^

1. He likes to eat apples, oranges and bananas.

>>correct

2. Having spoken to him earlier, I was not surprised to hear the news.

>>correct

3. This dish, when prepared correctly is very tasty.

>>correct

4. We enjoy sailing but, we enjoy swimming even more.

>> We enjoy sailing, but we enjoy swimming even more.

5. Robert, the son of the painter, is 35 years old.

>>correct

I decided to visit Daegu which is in the middle of between my hometown and base.

>>I decide to visit Daegu which is located in the middle of my hometown and base.

It needs more costs, on the other hands there is not a detour course.

>>It costs more; on the other hand, there is no detour.

eventually, It took a almost same time. but I satisfied with it.

>>Eventually, it took almost the same time, but I am satisfied with it.

I realized that the best way to go home is driving own car.

>>I realized that the best way to go home is to drive my car.

It is more costly way which isn\'t needed additional time.

>>It costs additional time to travel which is not needed.

I quote some phrase, \"Time is Gold\"

>>I quote the phrase, \"Time is Gold.\"

Even I will spend more money, actually I will earn a time.
>>If I spend a lot, definitely, it will take time.

By the way, I tell more story about my weekend.

>>By the way, I will tell more stories about my weekend.

At last, I arrived at home where my family are welcoming me.

>>At last, I arrived home, where my family welcomes me.

My father bought duck meat, mother made wonderful soup.

>>My father bought a duck meat and my mother made a wonderful soup.

and grand mother brought some food from her house.

>>My grandmother brought some food from her house.

I really enjoyed every meal I ate.

>>Correct!

OR >> I really enjoyed all the dishes they prepared.

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