I don’t see much…
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I don\'t see much ill-will toward superstitious people. Because it means thinking deeply about something and being careful in everything. But a person who believes too much in superstition is not good. This is because there is a possibility that those people will force their blind faith on others. Anything in moderation is fine. Unless they believe in superstitions that harm them.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t see much ill-will toward superstitious people.
>>> I don\'t see much ill will toward superstitious people.
Because it means thinking deeply about something and being careful in everything.
>>> CORRECT!
But a person who believes too much in superstition is not good.
>>> CORRECT!
This is because there is a possibility that those people will force their blind faith on others.
>>> CORRECT!
Anything in moderation is fine.
>>> CORRECT!
Unless they believe in superstitions that harm them.
>>> CORRECT!
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