I don't think I can explain my questions through talking so I wrote them.Have a great day;)Kristel;)

2014-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Kristel, could I ask some questions instead of writing a composition today? First, what does it mean 'He's such a worrywart in everything !( so it isn't isn't telling him things.)!'? It was the example sentence of word of day on February 10th. And in your feedback on February 11th, you polished my sentence like this. First, Picchachu was always there for his friend so I think, I see them very close more than best friend so I think I envy it. >>First, Picchachu is always there for his friend so I think, I see them very closed and even more than a best friend so I think I envied it. When I said 'close', I used it as an adjective. Like this sentence. They are really close friends. Lastly in the sentence 'However I want to explain why one of the reasons Koreans why would like to have part time jobs is to understand the society.' In here, is it still correct when I erase the second 'why' and put 'that' in front of the word 'Koreans'? Sorry for not asking questions right after each classes

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Hello there [이름] my dear!! I am really grateful for writing this one for me and calling my attention. I want to express my deepest apologies for some typographical errors I have commited here. :( First, with the sentence for the word of the day, it should be,  He\'s such a worrywart in everything so I didn\'t tell him things.\"Next, for the difference of close and closed. You are right, that is supposed to be close without a -d. I might have overlooked it as I was in a rush to send it to you. Lastly, for the last question, removing why and adding that would still be correct for that sentence. I really appreciate that you\'re taking some time to read everything I am sending and for letting me know about my short comings. I\'ll be more careful next time. I am terribly sorry for it. As I usually tell you, please feel free to ask questions and queries if you have any. They\'re always welcome. ^^ I\'d be looking forward to talking with you later~~ T.Kristel- Kristel, could I ask some questions instead of writing a composition today? >> CORRECT!!First, what does it mean \'He\'s such a worrywart in everything !( so it isn\'t isn\'t telling him things.)!\'? >> First what does this sentence mean, \"He\'s such a worrywart in everything so I didn\'t tell him things.\"It was the example sentence of word of day on February 10th. >> It was the example sentence for the word of the day on February 10th.And in your feedback on February 11th, you polished my sentence like this. >> CORRECT!!First, Picchachu was always there for his friend so I think, I see them very close more than best friend so I think I envy it. >> CORRECT!!>>First, Picchachu is always there for his friend so I think, I see them very closed and even more than a best friend so I think I envied it. >> First, Picchachu is always there for his friend so I think, I see them very close and even more than a best friend so I think I envied it.When I said \'close\', I used it as an adjective. Like this sentence. They are really close friends. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!Lastly in the sentence \'However I want to explain why one of the reasons Koreans why would like to have part time jobs is to understand the society. >> (sentence to be corrected) \' In here, is it still correct when I erase the second \'why\' and put \'that\' in front of the word \'Koreans\'? >> CORRECT!!Sorry for not asking questions right after each classes >> CORRECT!!

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