I don\'t think the fashion is important
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think the fashion is important but what I would like all of people have to wear a good outfit for polite looking to opponent
especially in the summer many of women wear the really short pant and crop top
To be honest when I saw the pretty women it is so way to good but if I saw fat women... that is not good...
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. I appreciate your honesty and effort in answering the homework question.^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. I wonder though where you saw these women...hmmm...kkk~ I hope we could have a chance to talk about this topic in class. Have a good night and I will catch up with you in class tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
TOPIC: Do you think it is important to be in fashion? What are some of the strangest fashions you have seen?
I don\'t think the fashion is important but what I would like all of people have to wear a good outfit for polite looking to opponent
>>> I do not think fashion is important but I would like all people to wear appropriate clothes and look decent to the opposite gender.
especially in the summer many of women wear the really short pant and crop top
>>> Especially in summer, many women wear really short pants and crop top.
To be honest when I saw the pretty women it is so way to good but if I saw fat women... that is not good...
>>> To be honest, when I see pretty women wear those clothes, it looks way too good but on overweight women, it does not look good.
TOPIC: Do you think it is important to be in fashion? What are some of the strangest fashions you have seen?
I don\'t think the fashion is important but what I would like all of people have to wear a good outfit for polite looking to opponent
>>> I do not think fashion is important but I would like all people to wear appropriate clothes and look decent to the opposite gender.
especially in the summer many of women wear the really short pant and crop top
>>> Especially in summer, many women wear really short pants and crop top.
To be honest when I saw the pretty women it is so way to good but if I saw fat women... that is not good...
>>> To be honest, when I see pretty women wear those clothes, it looks way too good but on overweight women, it does not look good.
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