I don\'t think there will be infinite patience in the world.

2023-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I don\'t think there will be infinite patience in the world. All the gods are patient. But I\'ve never seen a lot of religious people who are patient under those gods. How hard would it be for ordinary people to be so patient when they are so religious So I don\'t think there is infinite patience in the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름], 

Your essay on the finite nature of patience in the world offers an interesting perspective. I appreciated your observation about the apparent patience of gods in contrast to the exhibited patience of religious individuals. Your thorough analysis reflects a thoughtful examination of the topic. I anticipate reading more of your insights. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I don\'t think there will be infinite patience in the world. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I don\'t believe infinite patience exists in the world. 

All the gods are patient.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Gods are patient. 

But I\'ve never seen a lot of religious people who are patient under those gods. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>However, I haven\'t observed many religious people demonstrating the same level of patience ascribed to those gods 

How hard would it be for ordinary people to be so patient when they are so religious 

>>It would be challenging for ordinary religious individuals to attain the same level of patience. 

So I don\'t think there is infinite patience in the world. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Therefore, I don\'t believe there is infinite patience in the world. 

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