I don't under stand. ㅠㅠ
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Jessie!
I don't under stand Today Home Work.
This sentence
: Do you think working while studying is a good idea?
I think Do you mean : At the same time, Working and Studying are bad.
OR > When You can't focus working, going to the studying?
No difficult word But I want more easy sentence. ㅠ ㅠ
Thank you..
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for being honest and I\'m sorry if it\'s a bit hard for you.
However, I think that it\'s the easiest sentence for it.
Let me just rephrase it and give you guide questions in writing your composition.
Do you think it is a good idea to work while still studying in the university? What do you think will happen if a student is studying and working at the same time? Do you think she can study well or not?
I hope I didn\'t make it more complicated.
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie!
>> Correct!
I don\'t under stand Today Home Work.
>> I don\'t understand the homework today.
This sentence
>> This sentence:
: Do you think working while studying is a good idea?
I think Do you mean : At the same time, Working and Studying are bad.
>> I think you mean: Is working at the same time studying bad?
OR > When You can\'t focus working, going to the studying?
>> Do you mean: Will you study when you can\'t focus on your work?
No difficult word But I want more easy sentence. ㅠ ㅠ
>> Don\'t write difficult words. I want you to write easier sentences.
Thank you..
>> Correct!
Thanks for being honest and I\'m sorry if it\'s a bit hard for you.
However, I think that it\'s the easiest sentence for it.
Let me just rephrase it and give you guide questions in writing your composition.
Do you think it is a good idea to work while still studying in the university? What do you think will happen if a student is studying and working at the same time? Do you think she can study well or not?
I hope I didn\'t make it more complicated.
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie!
>> Correct!
I don\'t under stand Today Home Work.
>> I don\'t understand the homework today.
This sentence
>> This sentence:
: Do you think working while studying is a good idea?
I think Do you mean : At the same time, Working and Studying are bad.
>> I think you mean: Is working at the same time studying bad?
OR > When You can\'t focus working, going to the studying?
>> Do you mean: Will you study when you can\'t focus on your work?
No difficult word But I want more easy sentence. ㅠ ㅠ
>> Don\'t write difficult words. I want you to write easier sentences.
Thank you..
>> Correct!
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