I don\'t use my cell phone during driving.

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Cell phone is very useful to use in our daily lives. But it can affect a harm to user sometimes. I don\'t drive car too much. Todays I don\'t watch TV because I am reading a book. Walking is healthful to human body. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework!

I hope you are having a great day ☺


Cell phone is very useful to use in our daily lives.
But it can affect a harm to user sometimes.

>> Cellphone is very useful in our daily lives but it can sometimes affect the user in a harmful way.


I don\'t drive car too much.

>> I sometimes drive my car.


Todays I don\'t watch TV because I am reading a book.
>> I didn\'t watch TV today, I read a book instead.


Walking is healthful to human body.

>> Walking is healthy for our body.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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