I don\'t want to be a firefighter.

2025-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

학생이 쓴 원문

No, I don’t want to be a firefighter. I respect this job, but I scared fire. And when I imagine that I’m faced emergency situations, I feel very nervous and embarrassed. So, I\'ll do not anything in situations that need my help as a firefighter.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kara,

I think being a firefighter is really hard.

You need to be brave and strong mentally and physically.

I am watching a series called 9-1-1.

All characters are amazing.

Andrea

No, I don’t want to be a firefighter.

>> Correct

I respect this job, but I scared fire.

>> I respect this job but I am scared of fire.

And when I imagine that I’m faced emergency situations, I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

>> And when I imagine that I’m face in an emergency situation, I feel very nervous and embarrassed.

So, I\'ll do not anything in situations that need my help as a firefighter.

>> So, I\'ll do anything in situations that would need my help as a firefighter.

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