I don\'t want to be a knight
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, knight is very important job but I don\'t want to be. I\'ll cite two reason why I don\'t want to be.
First, my body type don\'t agree with this job. I\'m thine and I\'m not healthy(?). So I think if I be a knight, I can\'t fight well with enemies.
Second, I \'m not good at see blood. Knight have to kill enemies well, but I think i can\'t fight with enemies well.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Your homework is
well-organized and easy to understand. Very good! Just please take note of the ff:
a. Please focus on the proper use of articles.
b. Please study about the second conditional.
- Teacher Debbie
>> In my opinion, being a knight is a very important job, but I wouldn\'t want to be one.
First, my body type don\'t agree with this job.
I\'ll cite two reason why I don\'t want to be.
>> I\'ll cite two reasons why.
First, my body type don\'t agree with this job.
>> First, my body type wouldn\'t be fit for this job.
I\'m thine and I\'m not healthy(?).
>> I\'m thin, and I\'m not healthy.
So I think if I be a knight, I can\'t fight well with enemies.
>> Therefore, if I were a knight, I couldn\'t fight well with the enemies.
Second, I \'m not good at see blood.
>> Second, I don\'t like seeing blood.
Knight have to kill enemies well, but I think i can\'t fight with enemies well.
>> Knights have to kill enemies, but I think I couldn\'t fight with them well.
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