I don\'t want to be comedian

2021-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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Comedian becomes popular when that comedian is very funny. It needs talent. That talents mean like skill that is good at making jokes or fun jesters. It have to be creative. Secret to be popular comedian is creative funny jokes, jesters, and reactions. I am not confident this skill or talents. Usually, the people who are good at making creative and funny jokes have lots of friends. However, I don\'t have friends like them. It says I don\'t have talent that can make people laugh. In conclusion, I don\'t want to be a comedian.

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Hello, Daniel! Thank you for doing your homework.   The overall content of your work is comprehensible.  Please take note of the corrections. 


- Teacher Debbie

Comedian becomes popular when that comedian is very funny.
>> A comedian becomes popular when he/she is very funny.

 It needs talent.
>> Being a comedian needs talent.

That talents mean like skill that is good at making jokes or fun jesters.
>> That talent means the skill to crack good jokes like jesters.

It have to be creative.
>> He/she has to be creative.

Secret to be popular comedian is creative funny jokes, jesters, and reactions.
>> The secrets to becoming a famous comedian are creative funny jokes and reactions.

 I am not confident this skill or talents.
>> I am afraid I don\'t have these skills or talents.

Usually, the people who are good at making creative and funny jokes have lots of friends.
>> Usually, people who are good at making creative, funny jokes have lots of friends.

 However, I don\'t have friends like them.
>> This is a good sentence. 

It says I don\'t have talent that can make people laugh.
>>This means I don\'t have the talent that can make people laugh.

In conclusion, I don\'t want to be a comedian.
>> This is a good sentence. 

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